Cesar Nish
Saturday, November 12, 2011
Constructive criticism for short essay?
loved it. i don't know if this is on purpose or not but towards the end it feels as though you are listing a lot of things. (i don't like listing in my papers) I do not know who the targeted audience is so this may or may not be a bad thing.
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